Writing the scholarship essay and pier reviewing others helped me in my strategy for writing and with eliminating clutter. This project also gave me a foundation for what my actual scholarship essay will be. I was able to look at other scholarship essays that actually won scholarships.
In my scholarship essay https://docs.google.com/document/d/1OdxLsWuWzVo_tr1whk8Fm8_Q1xrGv5XvNAyk2st2Pj8/edit I use what I learned from others. Hopefully i’ll be able to make good use of my essay in the future. Whether I get to use the essay or not I learned good writing etiquette.
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